Film language test learner response

Sirs feedback:   28/48 (C)

www: quite detailed answers (expect question 4) using media terminology.
ebi: re-do question 4

Q4) The editing creates tension and drama from the continuous editing being used, the editing is also slowed paced to help with the tension. They have mainly used straight cuts, this allowed the audience to see the character, and the emotion they were showing to the audience, they also had straight cuts of the surroundings from the different ships to the water and finally at the end there was a straight cut to the buckets in zoom. This is effective because it allows the audience to see the different scenes and create an identification with the surroundings that the characters are in so they feel more connected to the movie.
Thought the editing, the director creates tension and drama to the scene by using continuous editing as they wanted the audience to make the adjustments and links to how they have introduced the characters and they think about them. This allows the audience to have judgement and enigma codes to the audience and make them wonder of what may happen next. This is effective because it allows the audience to make links to has happened and this also makes them interested in to the movie until they see a linear pattern in the narrative.
There is also a eyeliner match from the two characters, from the characters being introduced first to the protagonist who gives the representation of being bad, however as this is not followed by the editing, this raises tension because the audience wants to know who the is is but they are dragged on more into the movie to find out who it is. The slow motion used for the cigarette on the petrol and final shots of flames shooting into the sky, increases tension and emotional impact towards the audience but also to the atmosphere, the non- diegetic music supports the mood on the atmosphere too.
The sense finished with a slow dissolve into the final shot which serves to link the opening scene with  the press conference that follows.